The petals that grip so tightly to the core of a blooming flower
You are the day break that shines along the horizon
As well as the white ethereal moon that illuminates the lonely night sky
A gentle breeze carries the whispers that tells of your angelic smile
Under the seven stars marked as angel
Those who in time and of time grow envious of your shine
One of an essence so pure that it can cripple the heart of a god
And together bring serenity to a forgotten devil’s mind
Whereas you are the blessing that bestows benevolence onto the world
Therefore in your eyes lies a soul remarkably divine
So much so
That a fool like me cannot escape the thoughts of untainted pearls;
When it comes to the thoughts of you,
Thus I am drawn to you as if you were a holy sacred flame
But I know better…
For you are the elegant jewel elaborately placed within the gates of heaven
So all those that find their way to paradise first vision may be that of perfection
Convoluted I have become
Because I have always been a man
That has been very careful to remain he that is carefree
Furthermore since I drown in this virtue
The clouds have been the only sight on earth ever worth admiring…
Yet, now that I have seen you these drifting clouds simply will not do
…Beauty my dear is a face unknown, although what is known is how beautiful you are.
~ Paradise Poet ~
“…Beauty my dear is a face unknown, although what is known is how beautiful you are….”…..your concluding line for this amazing love poem, dear Tony Yang Sir, sets the loved one on the highest pedestal of beauty and bedazzled everlasting angelic admiration!
Some love is simply beyond our reach.. and maybe that is how poetry can be.. this seems so much like the love in a Shakespearean sonnet.
For you are the elegant jewel elaborately placed within the gates of heaven
So all those that find their way to paradise first vision may be that of perfection
Beautiful lines!! 😀
Very romantic poem, old fasioned in its descriptions and emotions, all hearken to another tjme.
A Classic and beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing
sweet, i specially like the image of eternal spring….
“For you are the elegant jewel elaborately placed within the gates of heaven
So all those that find their way to paradise first vision may be that of perfection” I know a few women who would melt beneath your words! -Patricia
Stories of Numerology tale
that some folks completing
all levels of earthly
task can come
back and enjoy
the Cloud
or shoot
for the
heavenly
Star
with
Angel
Guns
and THOSE
GUNS are
a draw for me..:)
This is a very romantic poem of utter adoration. I especially like, “The clouds have been the only sight on earth ever worth admiring…
Yet, now that I have seen you these drifting clouds simply will not do”
So much adoration pours out in these lines…it's beautiful 🙂