20 thoughts on “NOIR, THE PRIMROSE

  1. Enjoyed this, especially the rhythms and internal rhymes… and would love to hear it read aloud to pick up even more on those patterns

  2. ‘ Endless the well..’ phew, you can write! No place like Poetry to let us know what a ‘ raven wishes…’

    Extreme power in your rhythm. You should do this on stage. It’s a contemporary Shakespeare, it is love and peace on war. Love it!

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