Optic Gold

5 thoughts on “Optic Gold

  1. This is just…breathtaking and beautiful. Have read it through several times, especially like the lines:
    “…And where your eyes, within mine, shines of an iris gold”
    “So shall it be
    That within my dreams
    Your image will last for an eternity”
    Swept away by your words and imagery, just lovely.

  2. Glorious! The idea of living on in dreams, eternally, so ethereal. Your wording of “the sacred lie that lies within the hopes…” effective, well put. I loved this! Amy

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