10 thoughts on “Riven

  1. Romantic yet pinned with pathos, a victim who denies the state of it, a fool whose idealistic fantasies fail to register as such on their fundus. A terrific & dark tome; I like it, & the lines /perhaps the reason I look–/is to remind myself of how broken I honestly am/.

  2. I feel the enchantment he feels about this flawed yet attractive beauty. I also feel his pain as his own perceived shortcomings will keep him ever struggling about his own worth. Very strong inner emotions are so well developed here.

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