Sentiments Of Vertigo

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  1. ‘Do you truly love or is it really, in your eyes, an entitled elation you desire to hold, that you need to proclaim’.. my goodness there is such fire, such incredible allure in your words!!💘 Beautifully rendered!

  2. I like the very gentle use of internal rhyme in this poem, which foregrounds its dreamlike quality. I love the change in tone, especially:
    ‘Bringing so forth tragedy with my broken quill
    It matters not though anymore…a prisoner I have become to my own memories’
    and
    ‘Do you truly love or is it really, in your eyes, an entitled elation you desire to hold, that you need to proclaim
    Out of a fear concerning a lonesome derivative emotion, haunting you in a ghastly manner like a somber echo’.

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