Transit State Of Elegance

4 thoughts on “Transit State Of Elegance

  1. Your poem brings to mind what Madeleine L'engle wrote “In a recent article on astrophysics I came across the beautiful and imaginative concept known as 'the butterfly effect.' If a butterfly winging over the fields around Crosswicks should be hurt, the effect would be felt in galaxies thousands of light years away. The interrelationship of all Creation is sensitive in a way we are just beginning to understand.”
    I'm sure I can't grasp all you are saying here but I love the way you say it, esp…. “For we will mesmerize the world with our tempo, And the vibrational aura that gleams from our bodies Will echo throughout the universe.” and “For with our dance we will shake the cosmos, And bring movement to the stars.While the chaotic force of our gravity Shakes the foundation of any cosmic order.”
    Beautiful!

  2. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I am fond of the butterfly effect concept and wonder sometime of how even the slightest cause could create such elevated effects. Things like this inspire me to write… and if i keep typing another poem may come out. lol. Again thank you so much for your time and your words!

  3. For with our dance we will shake the cosmos,
    And bring movement to the stars… now how cool is that… dance on…dance on… cool when love is like that..

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