Obsidian Sands

3 thoughts on “Obsidian Sands

  1. Such amazing imagery in this poem, Ren’ee, and in the contrast of the white and black sands. The repetition of ‘Come and see there is so much more to see’ is an echo throughout, which draws the reader into the poem, as do the internal rhymes.

  2. This was such a rich journey. I loved the contrast of the obsidian and the white sands. I really loved this opening line-Upon these white sands where the shore crowned the ocean I have seen the end of my days.

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