Somewhere within my cerebral cortex
Lies a lobotomized lullaby that lingers like a foul, frantic phantom
Echoing more as gentle fowls parade the open ended sky
Listen carefully… its beautifully tormenting
Having nightingales sing memories of this known belle
Who I might add, absent of effort, caused my cerebellum to malfunction
For in a moment I fell, and nevermore it felt, that I was to fly without her
Yet the story goes, those ravens tend to know, more than this old broken crow
As in a time we glided as two doves intertwined
A picture in some eyes eternally benign, thus divine
The heliocentric couple crippled by a gap in time
Although, we had hope and a love that still makes me sigh
Reminiscent… is the lamented cardinal coded passion….
Therefore, if ever such a thing was restored
It would breathe joy onto paradise, as well as to the heavens above
Seeing as how she that gives happiness is your name, and the fault was surely mine to claim
So, Swallows feather the sparrow swift as it makes a winged descent…
The avian aerial flock majestic together aesthetic in the art of soaring beyond that horizon
Graceful you all shamelessly seem… just like her…Elegant, just like my Albina shall forever be
~ Paradise’s Poet ~
Enchanting love lines you have here dear Tony Yang Sir, echoing in the language of the birds with the charm of fables…such is the love for the total perfect goddess, a complete and an absolute magnetic albina, nice, sweet, caring, sexy and loving!
Thank you as always for the comment Vijay!
Incredible write..!
Thank you for reading!
This was beautiful and enchanting. My favorite line: “Yet the story goes, those ravens tend to know, more than this old broken crow”.
I’m glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you for reading!
ah, what’s not to like in this poem, all those beautiful birds have tails/tales. Enchanted by a magical paradise.
Thank you for taking the time to read! 🙂
Excellent use of alliteration in ‘Lies a lobotomized lullaby that lingers like a foul, frantic phantom’ creates a balanced line of soft lullaby and almost spitting phantom. It drew me in immediately., My favourite lines are:
‘As in a time we glided as two doves intertwined
A picture in some eyes eternally benign, thus divine
The heliocentric couple crippled by a gap in time
Although, we had hope and a love that still makes me sigh’
Gorgeous.
Thank you!
a true paradise it is…beautiful….
Thank you! 🙂
An incredible tribute to those birds of paradise !
SMiLes.. i suppose
i aM eXtra blesSEd
to be married to the
most beaUtiFuL 46
year-old woman/girl
iN the WORlD but i
hope i would stiLL
find that divine
feminine bird
oF Love’s
SpiRit
inside
mE
sTiLL
if sHe ever
flies away.. my friend..
aT some point wE aLL
sleep alone and or even
toGeTheR aLLoneNow..:)
beautiful