These passing spirits that intertwine
Are destine too fold.
Fated together as one.
For she will be my sun,
And I
Her everlasting moon.
Smiling to our future,
And holding memories of our past.
It’s moments like this that we dreamed of.
For we are locked within the thoughts of our intimacy.
As a gentle wind whisper signs of love,
And as our eyes meet
A calmness will over come our hearts.
Perpetual soul mates
Is what the world will label us,
And through the ages
Our affection
Will tell a story of true passion
This tale will be engraved in the book of life.
Heavenly inscribed
Serenity A Benevolent Aphrodite.
~ Tony Paradise’s Poet ~
Nice poem. I like the first stanza a lot.
Thank you Michelle! There will be more to come.
nice…sounds like you have found the one…i like the thought of being the moon to her sun…and that you two could write such a story as legend…smiles. welcome to dverse tony…
Thank You Brain! There will be more to come… Awesome comment by the way. I really appreciate it.
Sweet and romantic. Nice write.
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Perpetual soul mates sounds good you know… and being the sun / the moon for each other…nice… it just feels good to be heavily in love..eh… ? smiles
Very nice..the first stanza especially….I did feel that at one time but it was long ago…
Welcome to dVerse – sounds like you are writing your voice as a love song. Love, a strong emotion, is often a kick-off to writing poems. This is full of wonder and symbolism. Good way to go.
What a great tribute to love.. like how you refer to the soul.. that's the way to make it last..
Love love and love your words, especially for me too, the first stanza. Do hope your tale will be engraved in the book of life.
Anna :o]