6 thoughts on “Enchantée

  1. I have read this several times now. Melancholy, yes, but extremely moving. I sense the moon orbiting a singular life without his rose, now gone and returned to ions. I am deeply drawn by your words.

  2. This is beautifully written. Enjoyed the tone of the poem and all the images and references. The use of multiple languages always adds to a poem, I think.

  3. Oh my, I am fascinated by your words. This piece oozes of elegance. <3 I especially love these lines,

    "Forbore a dream est…a la vie…or…est a la mort…
    A riddle captivated by hamlet, thereby me too I suppose
    I long simply as a man missing a part of his infatuated soul thus,
    Enchantée am I via my own crippling woes; imposed upon by this enchanting delicate rose"

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